Monday 10 August 2015

The synopsis.

To send a novel off to publishers or agents you need to provide a one page synopsis of the whole novel. Basically chopping 94 000 words down into a meaningful, but miserly 575.

After many attempts I think I am going with:-

Synopsis – Book of Spells.
Pete Marsh (History graduate, life going nowhere) inherits an old ramshackle bookshop, only to discover it has its own hobgoblin, Gotluk, and is a gateway between the Fæ and human realms. Unlike the fantasy games of his youth, in the Fæ, goblins, ælves, dragons and magic are all real.
With his long time school mate Nigel Wadsworth (pudgy, heavy metal and fantasy loving overgrown teenager), Pete discovers he has magical talent and can use a powerful magic staff called Mircebane, that comes with a bound pixie called Pyewacket (a superb magic user with no sense of right and wrong). Oh! And, Pete is now the Guardian of the Gateways, responsible for controlling who or what crosses to and from the Fæ.
While being taught the rudiments of spell casting, Pete becomes aware that he and the bookshop have caught the attention of a group of mysterious, black clad Goth types.
When taking Gotluk, Pyewacket, and Nigel to a local Chinese restaurant for a thank you/celebration meal, the group are attacked and only just manage to escape out of the back door. Pete while running is poisoned in the shoulder by a thrown dagger, and has to be taken to the Ælven Queen, Flora Brightweather, for a cure.
Flora explains the truth about Pete’s newly acquired role and how he also inherited the Wicce, Black Annis (century’s old hag, who wants to send her goblin hordes through the gateways for revenge), as a mortal enemy, and it’s now his job to stop her.
Black Annis and her half goblin son, Moredread, kidnap Pete’s girlfriend Kate, and will only return her unharmed when they are given the fabled Book of Spells: a magic tome containing the spells to control the gateways. Using a necromancy spell, Pete speaks to the ghosts of the bookshop’s previous owners, and finds the book is hidden in the Fæ Fens.
While preparing their expedition to get the book, they grab a punky looking young women, Rhian O’Rourke, whom they think is Moredread’s spy, and lock her up in the dungeon so they are not followed.
The journey through the Fæ Fens is unlike any fantasy adventure they ever played as teenagers, and by luck and good fortune they somehow stay alive; helped by Tiddy Mun (old human wizard hiding from his past) and his water dragon called Marilyn, the group manage to rescue the book.
Facing the dilemma to either get Kate back, or possibly condemn thousands to a horrid death by handing the book over, a throw away comment by one of the ghostly former owners of the bookshop presents a rescue plan. Rhian it turns out is not Moredread’s spy but his victim. Combining the ghosts’ ability to open a temporary gateway with Rhian’s knowledge of Black Annis’ castle, a raiding party is formed to snatch back Kate.
The raid into the Fæ, through the temporary gateway, goes well at first. Moredread falls to his apparent death from the castle keep, and Kate is rescued. But surrounded by goblins Pete and co. have to escape down into the castle caverns. Tired, out of ammo, and short of magic power they meet Black Annis. Beaten and bloody, just as Black Annis thinks she has the book, Pete casts an incomplete gateway spell on her, and she is sucked down into the void. [Actually dropped into the Realm of the Dead, where she will return to haunt Pete.]